Amethyst Ink Editorial
Thank you for stopping by Amethyst Ink Editorial. My name is Demi Michelle Schwartz, and I’m a young adult fantasy and thriller author represented by Michelle Jackson at LCS Literary. I hold an MFA in Writing Popular Fiction from Seton Hill University, along with BAs in Creative Writing and Music. As an author and avid reader, I’m always immersing myself in the art of stories and strengthening my editorial vision.
A goal of mine is to always remain inclusive. I’ve worked with authors who are querying, agented, and both self and traditionally published. No matter where you are on your writing journey, I’m open to editing your work.
I focus on fiction, offering in-depth critiques of full manuscripts, opening pages, and short stories. Whether your work is middle grade, young adult, or adult, it has a home at Amethyst Ink.
My genre sweet spots are fantasy, mystery, and thriller, though I always enjoy a good contemporary, dystopian, horror, paranormal, or romance. Genres I’m not a great fit for are historical, science fiction, erotica, graphic novels, and novels in verse.
Below, please find a breakdown of my services and several testimonials from authors whose stories I’ve had the pleasure editing.
FULL MANUSCRIPT CRITIQUE (OPENING FOR 2025 BOOKINGS ON DECEMBER 21 AT 10 AM EST)
Word Count Rate: $3.50 per 1,000 words
Turn-Around Time: 10-17 days
If you have a finished full-length novel or novella and want an in-depth critique of your manuscript, this service is for you. My critique will provide feedback on both the developmental and line levels.
For developmental editing, I’ll focus on all the key story elements, including structure, plot, pacing, characterization, setting, worldbuilding, voice, and more.
On the line-editing side, I’ll focus on enhancing word choice, tightening sentences, removing unnecessary words and phrases, polishing descriptions, and improving the overall readability and flow of your prose. During this process, I’ll be sure to maintain your writing style and story’s voice.
For clarification, line editing does not focus on grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Those mechanical elements are perfected during copy editing. Rather, line editing deals with the language and creative content of the manuscript.
You’ll receive comments throughout the manuscript, overall notes after each chapter, and an editorial letter highlighting the story’s strengths and areas for revision.
DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING (OPENING FOR 2025 BOOKINGS ON DECEMBER 21 AT 10 AM EST)
Word Count Rate: $2.50 per 1,000 words
Turn-Around Time: 7-14 days
If you’re looking for editorial feedback on your full manuscript as a whole before polishing it on the line level, developmental editing is for you. I’ll focus on the big-picture elements, including structure, plot, pacing, characterization, setting, worldbuilding, voice, and more. You’ll receive overall notes at the end of each chapter and an editorial letter highlighting the story’s strengths and areas for revision.
OPENING PAGES CRITIQUE
First 5 Pages
Flat Rate: $15
Turn-Around Time: 2-3 days
First 10 Pages
Flat Rate: $25
Turn-Around Time: 2-3 days
First 50 Pages
Flat Rate: $50
Turn-Around Time: 3-5 days
If you’re seeking feedback on the beginning of your story, you can choose from getting your first five, ten, or fifty pages critiqued. Also, you’ll receive all the perks of a full-manuscript edit, including comments in the manuscript on both the developmental and line levels, overall notes at the end of each chapter if your submission spans multiple chapters, and an editorial letter highlighting the manuscript’s strengths and areas for revision.
SHORT STORY CRITIQUE
Flat Rate: $35 for stories up to 5,000 words
Turn-Around Time: 3-5 days
My short story critique includes both developmental and line edits. While reading, I’ll give feedback on big-picture elements, like structure, characterization, setting, voice, and more, while also focusing on overall flow and readability at the line level. You’ll receive comments throughout the manuscript and an editorial letter highlighting the story’s strengths and areas for revision.
FREE BONUS CALL
Duration: 30 minutes
Once you receive your edits and have time to look them over, take advantage of this special bonus to talk about your story. I truly love bouncing around ideas, working out kinks, and much more through an open conversation, since this is how undiscovered story gems can surface. This bonus is for all projects.
GEMSTONE CHAT
30 Minutes
Flat Rate: $25
60 Minutes
Flat Rate: $50
Whether you’re a previous client wishing to discuss your project further after your bonus call or an author looking for advice on your writing journey, book a gemstone chat. This is a wonderful opportunity to have an open conversation with me about your work. Are you eager to improve a certain craft element in your stories? Do you have an idea for a new project and want to fill plot holes before drafting? No matter what your personal goals are, a gemstone chat will give you the chance to unearth the sparkling answers and guidance you’re seeking.
BOOKING
Simply send an email to amethystinkeditorial@gmail.com with your chosen editorial service. Please ensure your manuscript is double spaced and in 12-point font. I can’t wait to work with you.
Please note, no manuscripts written with the assistance of AI will be accepted.
AUTHOR TESTIMONIALS
Christina – Literary Magical Realism
After several rejections on full requests, I decided to work with Demi and get her input on my first 50 pages. I knew something wasn’t quite working, but I couldn’t put my finger on it. I’m so glad I made that decision: Demi provided thoughtful and constructive feedback and highlighted both strengths and weaknesses. The line edits enhanced the overall flow and her comments in the document gave me guidance on what wasn’t working. Her detailed editorial letter gave me an overview of general areas to work on and was eye-opening.
The best thing about working with Demi was the call. We talked things through and I got some genius ideas from her about how to re-draft the beginning. After completing the edits, a number of agents agreed to look at the revision. Demi brought back my excitement about this manuscript and inspired me to make some significant changes that really enhanced the storyline, and I couldn’t have done it without her. She is a sensitive, smart and creative editor and I’d always work with her again. Thank you, Demi!
Mikala – Adult Fantasy
I recently had the joy of using Amethyst Ink Editorial’s services for my first book, and the experience was nothing short of exceptional. From start to finish, the process was smooth, professional, and incredibly insightful.
Demi provided detailed feedback that was both constructive and encouraging. She reviewed my first 50 pages, catching even the smallest of errors while also offering invaluable suggestions on structure, pacing, and character development.
I highly recommend Amethyst Ink Editorial to any author looking for a top-tier editing experience. Demi’s attention to detail was amazing and her passion for helping writers succeed was evident from the beginning. Her edits truly made my WIP better. I look forward to working with her again on future projects.
Hannah – Adult Psychological Thriller
Demi’s critique of my full manuscript was fast, thorough, and encouraging. Her edit letter made it clear that she was as fully invested in my story and characters as I am, and she did a great job outlining the strengths and weaknesses of the text. She also left line-level comments (and very entertaining commentary) in the manuscript itself which was above and beyond the level of service I’ve received in the past when I’ve paid for critiques.
Her expertise shines through in all her suggestions, which were both thoughtful and fair. I now feel confident in the next steps I need to take to make my manuscript as polished as possible before publication.
Katie – Adult Historical Dark Academia
Demi did a 50-page critique on my manuscript, and I would 10/10 recommend to a friend! She provided both an editorial letter and inline comments. Her critiques were extremely helpful and uplifting. She gave me actionable steps to take during my next round of revisions while also making me feel warm and bubbly with her comments about what was working already. I will definitely be hiring Demi again in the future!
L.D. – Adult Suspense
After several months of querying, I gave Demi the first fifty pages of my adult suspense/thriller to review. I was thrilled by the specific, actionable feedback she gave me right in the margins of the manuscript. She was very generous with the amount of positive feedback and next steps. She guided me with her tips on layout, removing filter words, and specific examples of showing emotion versus telling. Her edit letter was extremely thorough and targeted to the needs of my book.
She is very knowledgeable, and during the follow-up phone call, she answered any questions I had in a clear manner. I plan on going back to Demi with another manuscript for another developmental edit. Her rates are reasonable, she is very knowledgeable and can take any manuscript to the ‘next level.
Cidney – Adult Romantasy
I cannot recommend Demi’s editorial services enough! Demi helped me polish my pages so that they were query-ready. She found things that I had missed, and her thoughtful comments and questions strengthened my manuscript. She has great developmental and line-level insight, and is truly dedicated to making your book the best it can be!
Jenee – YA Fantasy
When I received Demi’s critique of my full manuscript back, it arrived at the same time as a personalized rejection from a literary agent. They both pointed out my manuscript needed more emotion and internalization on the page. The difference is Demi provided a road map for me to level up my work and included helpful suggestions and insight. I’m excited about how CRISP my book is, and I’m looking forward to querying more agents!
Bruce – Adult Superhero Novel
Demi Michelle Schwartz and Amethyst Ink Editorial provide white glove service at highly affordable rates. I asked Demi to give me a full developmental edit on the manuscript for my second novel. She over-delivered, giving me a thorough, thoughtful edit that greatly improved my manuscript at both the line and “big picture” levels. Plus, she responded to all my questions in a timely manner. I’d give Demi my highest recommendation and I definitely plan to work with her on future projects.
Jess – Adult Fantasy
Demi has an eye for detail that can’t be beat. Her enthusiasm is infectious and her feedback will leave you frothing at the mouth to jump back into your story! If you plan on hiring someone to critique your writing, Demi is the perfect person to trust with your words.
Medha – YA Thriller
Demi was great with the critique and editorial letter for the opening pages I had sent to her. I got very useful insights about what is working and what is not for my WIP – right from the POV to where I can add more meat to the story. The follow up call too was insightful and she patiently answered all the questions I had. So, thanks Demi for your feedback and I hope to work with her again in the future.
Alessandra – Adult Romantasy
Demi was such a joy to work with. Her feedback was specific and actionable, helping me take my manuscript to the next level before querying. I truly recommend her services.
Desirae – MG Fantasy
Demi is a book angel, heaven-sent! Before her, I had people say they loved my premise but didn’t want my work. I didn’t understand why. It ate at me night and day trying to understand what was wrong with my MS to make them not love the writing part of it. That’s why I gave my work to Demi.
Demi was the electricity I needed to turn on my light bulb. She gave me more wattage than I could ever ask for. I now have direction, clarity, and understanding. She opened up my mind, my heart, and my writing. She is wonderful. The best thing you could do for your manuscript!
Brandye – Speculative Women’s Fiction
Where to begin? I was brand new to the querying world when I found Demi on Twitter. Her bright personality and openness that came through the screen is what drew me into inquire about her services. I sent off a random email asking about her critiques, not sure what to expect, and in turn received a very sweet reply back, detailing what she offers and a suggestion on what would work best for me. I needed about half a second to think before I sent off my work.
I must have refreshed my email a dozen times in the coming days! But just a few days later, I received what I can honestly say would be the best edits/critique I have ever gotten. Demi is detailed, punctual, creative, insightful, helpful, and just an all around rockstar to have in your corner. I love working with Demi!
Michelle – YA Gothic Horror
Demi with Amethyst Ink is a joy to work with! Not only did she finish reading and critiquing my full manuscript ahead of her anticipated timeline, she provided extensive feedback that complimented strengths in my writing as well as tactfully pointing out areas that needed a second look. She’s a sharp-eyed editor who provides feedback in a friendly way that will make every writer feel like it’s their best friend beta reading.
I am currently making revisions based off her recommendations, and I have confidence that her suggestions will elevate my manuscript far beyond what I ever could have accomplished myself. If you are looking for an editor, I can’t recommend Demi enough!
Kathryn – YA Contemporary and Women’s Fiction
Out of the many readers I’ve had on my writing, Demi is one of my favourite. She has a talent for critiquing, with wonderful insights that are clever and logical. Her live-stream commentary is so fun to read. She is a true gem, with a great eye for both developmental and line edits. I don’t want to ever write a book without her feedback.
Haley – MG Fantasy
Demi is absolutely amazing! Her kind, enthusiastic feedback made my day, but she also gave really helpful notes that took the story to the next level. I definitely recommend working with her!
Gabi – YA Dark Fantasy
Demi’s feedback for my manuscript has transformed it completely. She thought of ways to help push the plot forward that fit well with the story, while keeping my characters’ personalities and motives in mind.
She went into detailed feedback for every chapter, while also leaving comments throughout chapters in specific spots that she either loved, or believed could be improved. She offered a great balance of positive and critical feedback. Demi’s care and passion for my story really shone through her comments.
I am beyond thrilled with her feedback and highly recommend her for developmental feedback and line editing!
Haley – YA Contemporary
Demi was super sweet and genuine to work with, and very helpful and encouraging when it came to suggestions for my manuscript. She had a quick turnaround time yet was very efficient with the edits and suggestions she made, which was something I appreciated. I really felt like my story was important to her. Not only did she point out the areas that needed work, but she also gave me praise for the strengths in my writing and made comments on the things she loved about my story.
Her editorial vision gave me a fresh perspective and made going into my revision something I was excited about, instead of something I was dreading. I am so grateful I got a chance to work with Demi, and I will definitely be considering her for future edits.
Viviana – Adult Psychological Thriller
Demi was so kind to provide me with feedback on both my query and first pages, which as you all know, are essential to the submission package for agents in the querying process! She not only gave me very kind comments on what she really liked, but most importantly, constructive criticism based on her editing and writing feedback, along with her first hand knowledge of the industry and what agents look for.
Her edits and insight made my query and first pages glow with an understanding of what works, what doesn’t, how to rearrange chapters for max effect, and how to make the query pop even more. Her feedback on how to get in the character’s head even more and not break the fourth wall was also invaluable and something my other beta readers did not catch before. All in all, she is amazing and I highly recommend her!
Rachael – YA Fantasy Novella
Demi was a dream to work with. Her insights were spot on, and she conveyed them in such a clear and positive way. I sent her the second draft of my story and asked for help on the character arcs. Not only did she note inconsistencies in the characters and world-building, but she also pointed out wording errors and crutch phrases and gave suggestions for stronger alternatives.
She was also very encouraging and supportive, giving as many compliments as suggestions, and I felt like she really got what I was trying to do even in such an early draft. She understood my vision and gave me the steps to make it a reality. I’ve never been more excited to start revisions!
Maddy – Speculative Short Story
Demi knows how to edit on both a macro and micro level. Her macro editing is thought provoking. She asks questions and makes suggestions that help deepen the context of the story and clarify any plot issues. Her line editing not only cleans up the writing, but provides insight into things to consistently keep an eye out for in later writing.
Demi gives clear and constructive feedback, while also celebrating triumphs. She mentions when something works well and makes it clear when she wants more of something that’s good. There’s a reason I ask Demi for critiques on my short stories and it’s because I always get great edits back.
Nicole – Adult Mystery
Demi was a beta reader for my first novel, and I found her feedback incredibly helpful, both on the big picture and line editing aspects. For developmental edits, she provided very useful feedback on improving the character development for the character who I had struggled most with.
On the line editing side, she very patiently removed about 100 unnecessary adverbs from my draft! She also provided useful suggestions to help make my descriptions more specific, and did a great job calling out words / phrases I used too often.
Lastly, I appreciated Demi’s positive reinforcement as well – she took the time to insert comments where she felt the dialogue, scene descriptions, etc. were especially strong. This helped me move forward confidently to the next phase of self-publishing.
Sophia – YA Dystopian Fantasy
Demi beta-read my debut manuscript in March 2023. It was the first time I shared my manuscript with anyone outside my immediate family/friend circle and I was super nervous about it.
All I can say is that without Demi’s sharp perspective, dedicated line-edits and overall structural comments, my manuscript would never have achieved its true potential. She immediately saw things about my plot twists that needed amending, and also very quickly grasped the essence of my main characters, helping me write a story that is both true to my vision, true to my characters and conforms with market expectations.
If you’re feeling stuck with your manuscript, and need a fresh pair of eyes and some key actionable feedback (alongside some great fan-girling), I would recommend you contact Demi.
Colin – Horror Short Story
Demi brought her talented and finely-honed critical eye to one of my short stories. Not only did she provide insightful feedback on its themes and potential ways to improve their strength, but she also highlighted areas that she thought worked, giving me the confidence to trust my intuition.
Also, Demi provided her feedback quickly and thoroughly, never missing a thing. Her communication was always kind and supportive, and I would not hesitate to work with her again on my fiction. I cannot recommend her highly enough.
Sally – YA Contemporary Fantasy
Demi Schwartz did an excellent job in editing my novel, The Werecat Chronicles. Her developmental editing skills are exceptional. She helped me iron out plot problems and character motivation, as well as pointing out logic and continuity lapses. She pointed out areas where my main character needed to demonstrate more feeling, by showing, rather than telling.
Her line editing skills are also outstanding. She helped me restructure sentences and made suggestions for better meaning and comprehension. Demi helped me to correct my dialogue, making it more concise and snappy, Demi’s knowledge of grammar and punctuation helped me immensely. I’m really thankful to Demi for helping me sharpen the vision I had for my novel.
Kimberly – YA Thriller
If you’re looking for someone to help you revise your work, Demi is a great choice! She leaves encouraging and helpful comments as she reads, as well as useful end of chapter comments. She’s also skilled at reading for details and able to find inconsistencies that others miss. Demi has the background and experience to help take your draft to the next level, but also the enthusiasm to make you excited to start revisions!
Vicki – Adult Mystery
Demi is a thoughtful and thorough editor. She is especially helpful when it comes to emotion in a manuscript. Another trait I appreciated was her timeliness in returning comments.
